Monday, 1 August 2016

Description by James, Shayne, Tammy, Devya

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The Cycle Race


The group of cyclists went racing along the road. They were wearing nice warm sporty  clothes. There was freezing cold snow. The  cars were quickly following them.
They all want to come first.The cars were following them so no one gets hurt. The white snow followed them too the finish line. They were in different lines so they could overtake people. They were so exited that they were hot and puffed.

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