Monday 1 August 2016

Description by Joerick, Max, Gianni, Alyssa, Micah

WALT add descriptive words to our writing.





The Cycle Race


The experienced cyclists zoomed along the slippery icy road like a Ferrari racing. They were wearing snuggly warm protective clothes. There was fresh white crunchy cold snow. The cars were following them slowly to not endanger the riders. There was a green big sign. There were dark green snow covered trees.

1 comment:

  1. Great work! You used lots of descriptive words.

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