1. Joerick was trying to persuade that white tail spiders are dangerous. 2.No because you didn't write much. 3.No. 4.We would also like to know the size of the white tail.
Joerick was trying to persuade me that white are dangerous.I think you need to write longer storys. You need to have more full stops and capital letters. I want to now more about white tailed spiders.
well done jorick
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ReplyDeletewell done jorick but i think you need to do more by shayne
ReplyDeleteDid you use kapitl letters and full stops by alex
ReplyDeletewere you persuaded? by shayne
ReplyDeletewhat was the writer trying to persuaded you about? by shayne
ReplyDeletewhat was the writer trying to persuaded you about? by shayne
ReplyDeletewhat was the writer trying to persuaded you about? by alex
ReplyDeletedo you really think that spiders are helpful by shayne and alex
ReplyDelete1. Joerick was trying to persuade that white tail spiders are dangerous.
ReplyDelete2.No because you didn't write much.
3.No.
4.We would also like to know the size of the white tail.
Joerick was trying to persuade me that white are dangerous.I think you need to write longer storys. You need to have more full stops and capital letters. I want to now more about white tailed spiders.
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